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No
13% (1 vote)
Wait for someone to drop off first
75% (6 votes)
Wait for the Midseason recruiting drive
13% (1 vote)
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Will Anton become a regular on LABN?
Current Status: Waiting for an opening
Will Anton become a regular on LABN?
Very original, and mostly I like it very much. I do have a slight problem with the half-human/half-vampire thing, since we've been so strict about that of late. But at least he has an explanation for why he is that way.
It sounds like a fascinating character, given what background we have... but I don't see any sign that Lúcio has thought about what he will be doing with Anton in the future. What drives Anton, what are his goals? Is he already in LA, or if not why does he go there? Does he have any enemies?
The background says he's a Fundamental Head - but which of the five elements is his forte? What exactly can he do in relation to these? I'd be a bit leery of someone who already has all the vampire traits AND can walk in sunlight if they were also able to control the elements (imagine Saruman mixed with Blade!). And what about any weaknesses? Does Holy Water hurt him? Can he die by human means, or does he have to have a wooden stake through the heart or be decapitated? He's already immune to sunlight...
Some clarification of his total powers would be nice - and some idea of where Anton might be heading in the future. But still, an original concept and I do like many of the ideas presented. Even after revision, however, I think given our current glutted status, Lúcio might have to wait until we had a space, or until Mid-Season possibly.
Will Anton become a regular on LABN?
Ditto, wait.
Although I would say we have a tad too many half-vamps running around. I mean, they're supposed to be rare, right? and we've got what, two? three? Something like that.
Will Anton become a regular on LABN?
I like it, and normally would say yeah, but I think its better to wait if someone drops
Character Proposal: Anton
Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(lakmeno@bol.com.br) on Tuesday, July 29, 2003 at 00:51:06
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charname: Anton
race: Half-human/ half-vampire
gender: Male
bdate: 03/31/1907 - Hungary/ Vasvár
group: Society Of The Great Veils
position: Fundamental Head (not the 'big one', just one of the main heads)
descript: He is very tall, long dark hair. Dark, sometimes gray eyes. The skin is very light, very white. The vampire blood makes him always look like 35 or 40 years old. The human blood alows him to walk by sunlight.
Very observer, quiet person, but not unpleasant. Romantic, likes women very much. And women likes his bass voice.
Music and cinema are his passions. Plays oboe very well. Likes coffee and tobacco and has a crush on chocolate. Likes to read as much as possible. Likes long walks and watch the dawn.
Is harmless until someone, or something, warm his vampire blood. He has terrible nightmares when he sleeps, so he don't do this as often as regular humans do. Sometimes he has anaemia, because of the strugling between the two bloods inside his body. When it happens he has a special chalice that alows him to "fabricate" one drop of vampire blood using a human one.
history: He is son of Lajos Szabó and Albertha Czeller Szabó. Both of them was integrants of the Society Of The Great Veils.
This society has no writen history because it's a very secret one. The main bedding is that every manifestation of Nature has a correspondent force inside us. These forces they call "veils". Once you are able to detect, analyze and control your veils, then you learn how to use this knowledge to control its analogous in Nature.
Mountains, waterfalls, rivers, trees, clouds, flowers, fruits, animals are just a few subdivisions of the Society. These are call "Complementar Veils". Each person has a stronger veil, it can be mountains, for example, or rivers. When you learn how to control your inner veils and control the analogous in Natures, you do a test to get in the "Fundamental Veils". These veils, are big forces, like Earth, Air, Water, Fire and Metal.
Each Veil have one 'Head'. The Complementar Veils have Complementar Heads; Fundamental Veils have Fundamental Heads.
It's a very ancient Society and both families of Lajos and Albertha are in it for a very long time.
In June, 12th of 1906 Lajos and Albertha got married. Lajos was 18 and Albertha was 17 years old. In March, 31st of 1907 Anton Szabó was born. Anton's father died when he was 6 years old. After that his mother was very depressed, but 6 years after Lajos death, she met Ferenc, a very seductive man. He was a vampire disguised. A year after she met him, he became very strange and one night he wanted to take Anton for a ritual which would give him a very big power. It would be not simple, he should make Anton, a 13 year old boy to drink a little of his blood, two drops of his tears, spit, sperm and piss. And then, when Anton would had taked his fluids, Anton would have to put an enchanted dagger in Ferenc's heart. Part of his body would die, but his power would be very big. Anton, stuned by a potion, drank the fluids, but when he was going to thread the dagger, Albertha appeared and set Ferenc on fire.
Anton had fever for days and days and almost died, but the Heads of the society stayed day and night around him healing with theyre power. He survived, but one of the main Heads told Albertha that he would have to leave the country because of his nature was now changed for good, and he represented danger to the Society. And so did Albertha, traveled all Europe and died when Anton was 19 years old, at the year of 1926. After that he went to United States and lives there 'till today.
items: Anton has a chalix which gives him the power to transform human blood in vampire blood. He has a book with all the knowledge he and his mother could get of the Society Of The Veils.
powers: He has an extra-human strength. His sight by night is even better than at the day light, and a supersonic hearing. Besides his almost irresistible charm.
player: My name is Lúcio, I'm brazilian, 26 years old. I study Music at the college and play the piano, sing and compose.
I've never played this kind of game and I know a little of Buffy.
age: over13
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