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Yes - bring him in now
0% (0 votes)
Yes - start him at the end of Season Three
0% (0 votes)
Maybe - how about some revision?
63% (5 votes)
No, not at all
38% (3 votes)
Total votes: 8
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Is Rick a worthy candidate for LABN?
Status: Waiting for revision/Openings
Is Rick a worthy candidate for LABN?
i'm sorry but i have to agree with lou and say it lacks great originality...i just skimmed through the profile and lots of sentences stood out to me as describing Angel, the leather jacket was one of them, the greater good was another.
I have to vote it a no, a new start from scratch might turn out better.
Is Rick a worthy candidate for LABN?
Revenge was a character that was actually accepted once before at the beginning of Midseason one. He never posted and finally wound up on the pile of non-starting NPCs (or did I just erase his entire existence? I'm not sure)
I am willing to entertain the idea of bringing him back but I agree with Lou that he needs to lose some of the cliche and become a more original character before I'd consider it.
Is Rick a worthy candidate for LABN?
Hmm, I'm not sure. There are some good ideas here, unfortunately I find the overall proposal to be somewhat cliche ridden - Rick is the typical hero born out of the death of one of his parents AND true love (who is a vampire now).
I don't know, I don't like being so critical but this doesn't really strike me as an original character and I believe that we have turned down proposals from other people that have shown more originality. Plus, the writing style doesn't show much flair for creativity to me. (Remember how excited we felt when we recieved applications for Sam Aubrey and Parasol? I don't feel that here. :(
Character Proposal: Rick "Revenge" Parra
Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(Jasonkidd1722@yahoo.com) on Monday, September 29, 2003 at 23:38:02
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charname: Rick "Revenge" Parra
race: Demon
gender: Male
bdate: May 14, 1983, Chicago, Illinois
descript: My character is 6'1 200 pounds a very muscular build dark brown eyes and hair. Is one of the strongest demons ever. Very smart but with a temper. Considered more of a loner but if needed will work together with others to accomplish the greater good. Always thinks of others instead of him. Only runs from fights if COMPLETELY and UTTERLESSLY hopeless. Both of a follower and leader. Always wears his leather jacket with dark clothes and sun glasses. Knows the true meaning of good and would never betray anyone. Hard to find anyone smarter then him when it comes to strategy.
history: Born on May 14, 1978. Father was a skull demon named Armando "Armagan" Parra and mother was a human named Ana Parra also had brother who was nine years older but killed by their father. His father is the most dangerous ever of the skull demons a demon notoriously known for being destructive and completely evil. Mother died by his father killing her. Mother's last request was for Rick to always fight for good and never give up. Rick only ever skull demon not to be evil. Defeated and killed his father at the age of 15 establishing himself as the most feared ever skull demon to exist. Had a girlfriend who was his true love named Alina. She was turned into a vampire by his former best friend. Never was able to kill her in his many chances. He did however kill his former best friend and vampire enemy named Alfonso Garcia. Has established himself as a force to be reckoned with in many areas. Now he is looking for a place where he can do greater good but with Alina cotemplating to follow and eventually kill Rick whereever he goes.
items: Sword and battle ax.
powers: Can change into a black and red like skull suit form with spikes coming out of his knees and elbows. Has to power to shoot fire out of his eyes. Has a poison spike attack that he uses when he needs to bide time or when he wants to inflict harm throught the battle. Extremely poweful in hand to hand combat and weapons fight. Has good amount of speed. Makes up for his lack of speed with his brains using both his mind and strength to his advantage.
played_by: Tobey Maguire
player: My name is John Lopez i am 17 years old. I have a great amount of knowledge of both Angel and Buffy. They are my two fav shows. I go to school and play football and coach basketball at my old grammar school.
age: over13
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This particular character was submitted and accepted back before Season Two started, but he never got rolling. Our circumstances have changed somewhat since then, however... Please leave comments below, as usual.