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Hope away - I don't like it.
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There is Always hope - Try revising
43% (3 votes)
Hope springs eternal - I like it.
29% (2 votes)
I hope there are refreshments.
29% (2 votes)
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Does Hope have any hope?
Well, about the actress i'll tell you that Liv Tyler is already taken and for some reason people around here dont like Rose McGowen :wink:, I'd go for Rachel Leigh Cook.
I like the character, it's somewhat similar to Leigh's but since Helen (it was helen, right?) only wrote one post and never again, i think it's ok. And you much improved your spelling and punctuation, thanks :D.
About advise, feel free to add me to your contact list in msn and i'll help you as much as i can.
Does Hope have any hope?
Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(crazycutie321@hotmail.com) on Wednesday, June 30, 2004 at 14:50:52
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charname: Hope
race: Vampire
gender: Female
bdate: 2/28/85 in Los Angeles
group: none
position: N/a
descript: She has straight brown hair. She has brown eyes. She is attractive but not eye catchingly pretty. She is pale.
history: Hope has always been a wild child. Her parents divorced when she was 4 so her dad was never a part of her life. Her dad paid her mom enough spousal support to afford the lavish lifestyle she was accustomed to. Hope didn't have a lot of supervision so many a night she could be found at a club. She loved music. She danced with boys, girls, it didn't matter as long as she was dancing. When she was dancing she felt powerful. Primal. The beat filled her with an energy. Subconsciously she was always looking for a connection. Hope had always been a loner but deep down she wanted someone to notice her pain. So every night she went out but every night she went home alone to an empty house. One night as she left her favorite nightclub, covered in a sheen of sweat, a man stopped her. As he began to speak Hope rolled her eyes. She was tired and she just wanted to go home. As she continued her walk to the car, suddenly she was hit from behind. As her face hit the pavement she started to scream but the loud music drowned her out. No one noticed. As the man sunk his fangs into her neck she began to struggle but he was too strong. As she listened to her heart slowing she knew this was no man. Then everything went dark. When she awoke she was in a coffin. As she crawled herself out in an animal frenzy, she heard laughing. When she finally broke out, she gulped in fresh air. She turned and saw her sire. She leaped at him and began to claw at his face. He turned at ran. He never was good at choosing childes. Hope strolled home. She grabbed a bag full of stuff and then left the house. This had never been a real home to her anyways. She walked out without a speck of remorse and never looked back. As she prowled her neighborhood, she saw a couple strolling down the street. They were in love. Whispering, laughing, kissing. Hope didn't smell any fear. Why would they be afraid? They were in a wealthy neighborhood. And besides, youth always feel immortal. She would strike fear in their hearts. Hope giggled. She moved in on her prey. Hope snuck up behind them and snapped the man's neck effortlessly. As his girlfriend screamed, Hope sank her fangs into the vein. As her mouth filled with warm crimson blood, she drank it down. She dropped the body to the floor and smiled. That was just what she had been looking for. Whatever she was now, she felt powerful. Strong. She felt connected to the world around her. She could hear the heartbeats from the homes around her, smell the blood of the animals outside. She continued walking until she found an apartment. She walked inside and slaughtered the owner. As the sun rose, she curled up under the covers and feel into a deep sleep. Tomorrow maybe she would find someone she'd wanna keep around.
items: She has a bag filled with clothes and necessities from home. She also has a newly stolen apartment which is furnished.
powers: She is stealthy as she has had to sneak into her house quietly many a night. She is unassuming and small so she can trick her victims into feeling falsely at ease. She is strong and has the usual vampire powers. She is also a rather brutal and merciless killer as she never really felt connected to mankind in the first place. One major weakness is her desire to be loved. We will see what role this plays in her future.
played_by: Rachel Leigh Cook, Rose McGowan, Liv Tyler
player: I am 15 (my previous age was a typo). This would be my first roleplaying game but I do write a lot. I'm really into both Buffy and Angel. I have been looking around the site to familarize myself with the story and the characters. Oh and I'm not sure about the actress so any advice would be appreciated.
age: over13
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Does Hope have any hope?
I would definitly be willing to work on it. My entry had a little bit more detail (and less spelling mistakes *cringe*) but when I pressed enter I had forgotten to click over 13. The whole thing deleted. Grr. I rewrote it quickly. But I'd be more than willing to flesh it out.
Does Hope have any hope?
This does bear considering. As a jump off point, it's pretty good. I think it still needs to be fleshed out. What are the character's motivations? Is she your run of the mill vampire or is there something that sets her apart? If so, why and how? There's potential here, as I've already said. If she's willing to work on it a bit more, then I think it would probably be very good.
Character Proposal: Hope
Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(crazycutie321@hotmail.com) on Sunday, June 27, 2004 at 15:55:10
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charname: Hope
race: Vampire
gender: Female
bdate: 2/28/85 in New York
group: none
position: N/A
descript: She has straight brown hair. She has brown eyes. She is attractive but not eye catchingly pretty. She is pale.
history: Hope has always been a wild child. Her parents divorced when she was 4 so her dad was never a part of her life. Her dad paid her mom enough spousal support to afford a lot. Hope didn't have a lot of supervision so many a night she could be found at a club. She loved music. She danced with boys, girls, it didn't matter as long as she was dancing. When she was dancing she felt powerful. Primal. The beat filled her with an energy. One night as she left her favorite nightclub, covered in a sheen of sweat, a man stopped her. As he began to speak Hope rolled her eyes. She was tired and she just wanted to go home. As she continued her walk to the car, suddenly she was hit from behind. As her face hit the pavement she started to scream but the loud music drowned her out. No one noticed. As the man suck his fangs into her neck she began to struggle but he was too strong. As she listened to her heat slowing she knew this was no man. Then everything went dark. When she awoke she was in a coffin. As she crawled herself out in an animal frenzy, she heard laughing. When she finally broke out, she gulped in fresh air. She turned and saw her sire. She leaped at him and began to claw at his face. He turned at ran. He never was good at choosing childes. Hope strolled home. She grabbed a bag full of stuff and then left. She saw a couple strolling down the street. They were in love. Whispering, laughing, kissing. Hope snuck up behind them and snapped the man's neck. As his girlfriend screamed, Hope sank her fangs into the vein. As her mouth filled with warm crimson blood, she drank it down. She dropped the body to the floor and smiled. Whatever she was now, she was happy.
items: She has a bag filled with clothes and the necessities.
powers: She is stealthy, as she has always been quiet. She is unassuming so she can trick her victims. She is strong and has the usual vampire powers.
played_by: Kristin Davis
player: I'm 16. This is my second entry.
age: over13
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The first entry by this player was rejected for being too Mary-Sueish. This character proposal bears some consideration as it shows some signs of careful thought.