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Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(elocutus@cloud9.net) on Sunday, March 2, 2003 at 02:15:59
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charname: Aron
race: Human
gender: Male
bdate: 10.3.1921 Amsterdam
group: Loosely affiliated with Cult of Fascion
position: Loner
descript: Aron is a wiry, angular man, not quite six foot tall. Because he eats as little human food as possible, he tends to gauntness most of the time. He is exceedingly pale with brown hair cut short, near the skull, and brown eyes.

history: Born and presumably abandoned in Amsterdam in 1921, Aron is believed to be of Jewish descent, though his actual parentage is unknown. Rescued from a discarded hay wain by Peter Voorhes, he was raised as a member of a moderately prestigious dutch trading family. As the privations of post-World War I Europe caused the family's fortune to dwindle, they became increasingly involved in illicit trade to make up the shortfall.

By 1938, Aron was living alone in Marseilles, facilitating the opium trade for his family and enjoying many of the illicit pleasures that city could provide. While fastidious about his work, he was rather fond of drinking, gambling, and whoring. And, while such pasttimes might kill a normal man, Aron was able to hold his drink and calculate odds well enough that he seemed to live a charmed life. And, rather than being his downfall, whoring turned out to be the catalyst for his unlikely survival.

Being a young man, still in his teens, Aron fell in love with a French prostitute named Chantale. Chantale also caught the eye of a much older man, the Baron Aguerre d'Acquitaine. The baron, being a vampire of some five centuries, was so enamored of Chantale that he contrived to make her into one of the undead as well.

After her ascendancy to vampirism, Chantale took up residence in the home of the Baron, leaving the brothel at which she worked. Aron went looking for her. But, before he could find her, the Germans had begun their blitzkrieg agro France. The attack on Marseilles destroyed the brothel and exposed the baron's sleeping form to sunlight.

With her lover and benefactor dissolving into flames, her home ruined, and no old home to go back to, Chantale sought refuge with the only other man who had ever shown her kindness. Aron, who did not expect to be able to practice his trade under the Nazis was already packing to flee. He took her with him.

As they traveled, it became impossible for Chantale to hide her condition from Aron, particularly when they got too far away from civilization for her to feed regularly. He offered himself to her, fully expecting to die. Instead, she drank from him only what she needed until she was able to feed again, at which time she would give her own vampiric blood back to him.

After many narrow escapes, they made their way from Marseilles to a small village in Finland. The next three years of the war they spent, living quietly in a state of near-idyll. While Chantale was clearly his master, Aron also considered her his lover. Once the war was over, they planned to move further south, to more populous towns where there would be enough of a "herd" to feed two vampires and then she would make him.

But, before they were ready to move, the Baron's ancient rival, a Russian vampire named Piotr found them. The baron and Piotr had been at war with each other, using their own vampiric offspring to fight each other. With the baron gone, Piotr vowed to destroy all of his offspring and end the war once and for all.

Ignoring her pleas that she knew nothing of any war or of the Russian vampire, Piotr tore Chantale limb from limb. Aron tried to stop him, but got nothing but a mild concussion and a shattered ankle for his troubles. Considering Aron beneath contempt, Piotr left him alive. Despondant, Aron began to travel around Europe, trying to find vampires who would let him serve, would let him feed, and would feed off of him as well. He knew that he would probably end up a meal soon, but he didn't much care. He hardly ever ate, food or blood, and began to grow gaunt and pale.

The only thing that kept him alive was the desire to kill Piotr and his spawn, avenging Chantale. He would probably never have a shot at this goal if he hadn't found the Stake of An-ha'arah, an ancient artifact that, when driven into the heart of a vampire, dose not kill it immediately, rather immobilizing it. When it is pulled out of the chest, the vampire disintingates into dust.

Since then, he has become an itinerant vampire hunter of sorts. He is always seeking out newly-made ones to which he can bond. He will often slay those he finds who revel too much in their own evil, sometimes feeding from them, sometimes not. Those who can trace their lineage back to Piotr, he kills on sight, unless doing so would put him at grave risk. He does not feed from these unless he is at a time of deep need and always does so with a deep sense of self-recrimination.

This year, Aron has discovered the Piotr is now in Los Angeles, so he has followed him there. In Los Angeles, he has attatched himself to Rifkeh Zylbershlag, a freshly-made (about a decade or so ago) member of The Cult of Fascion.

Aron has a number of quirks. He ages only when he can not get a regular supply of vampire blood and now appears to be in his mid-to-late 30s. He hates to eat human food and does so as infrequently as possibly, believing (incorrectly) that it causes him to age. When seeking a master, he will always prefer a female one, since he makes very little distinction between feeding and sex. Because the stake does not provide a means for feeding, he is forced to carry around any number of precision cutting tools for getting through thick vampire skin to a vein. Seeing him at work can put even other hunters off of their feed.

Because he has fed off of so many vampires for so many years, Aron is either picking up some of their sun-weakness or suffering from psychosomatic heliophobia. His addiction both to feeding and being fed upon is so great that he has often encouraged too many vampires to feel off of him or one to feed more than he can handle and, on two occasions, been rendered near death by the experience.
items: the Stake of An-ha'arah - an ancient stake, imbued with the power to immobilize vampires by a dark priest who wanted to use their blood for a great summoning some 800 years ago.
powers: Increased physical strength (high human)
Magic use (low, cantrips and parlour tricks)
played_by: Crispin Glover
player: I'm Jekke--32 years old, 20+ years of RPGs in one form or another. My career is in software development and technical writing, but I also do comedy writing (www.insidejoke.tv,) political writing (www.angryconservative.com,) fiction and erotica (I'll show you a link when you know me better.)

While I do consider myself a political conservative, I should mention that the kicker line for my next ac.com article is "The Republican Party can kiss my conservative, white ass." I'm actually much easier to get along with than dogmatics on either side of the fence.
age: over13
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MrDave's picture

Note the date this came in...I must have really been out of it, I missed it totally. It was in my inbox the whole time.

This guy sounds like a nut. Crazy, clever, and all in all our kind of people. What kind of roleplayer apologises for his political views? LOL

Deep background, but it looks liek he might be a tough fit, I saw a couple of hooks to bring him in (Piotr could be Mikhail for example...or even Valerian). His ties to Faschion are tenuous but a lot of it depends on where he takes that story.

And Crispin Glover ("Oh, McFly!"). Gotta love that.

Thumbs up.

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Firefly's picture

Yes, yes, a thousand times yes. I am in love with this whole crazy, original thing. And Crispin Glover is too creepy not to adore. Quick snap him up before he disappears from our radar....

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Firefly's picture

I too am intrigued by this character description. It's different enough to leave plenty of new avenues to explore and I like the ambiguity of "alignment". I say invite him in.

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Heather's picture

I'm speechless. A great character concept.

Dave's right, though... if Piotr has been in LA for a while, he must have been keeping a low profile. LA might be a big town, but master vampires tend to make a bit of a splash.

But yes, yes, YES! Snare Jekke before he gets away. :)

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Tarix Conny's picture

Me like :D I like that fact that he's put a lot of research of historical politics into his character submition. sign him up by all means!!!

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Parasol's picture

What!? Erotica. My kinda writer. Though Crispin Glover gives me a serious case of the Wiggins (not going to see "Willard"), such an intriguing character. Sign him up!

Dante Riggs aka Ed

MrDave's picture

Has opted to not play. Sorry folks. He asked me to remove his character so Its gone, deleted and not even an NPC.

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Parasol's picture

Bummer. Did he balk at changing his creation?

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Tarix Conny's picture

:( and i was really getting interested in learning about Akido...guess i'll have to google now....

Dave, did he give any reason why?

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MrDave's picture

The reason he gave was he could not get LABN to load right into AOL 7.0 I suggested upgrades and external browsers first...

He said no

I sent him 3 other options, and he never replaied.

Then I got an email that said he wanted out.

I can't force him to stay...but I can't make him want to be here either

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Parasol's picture

Too bad. His loss because we really are quite fabulous.

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Meredith Bell's picture

LOL! Ain't that the truth ;)

Character Submission: BASDWOATX

MrDave's picture

> Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
> (happywomen3_420_6969@yahoo.com) on Sunday, March 16, 2003 at 00:11:28
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> charname: BASDWOATX
> race: Vampire with a soul
> gender: female
> bdate: June/20/1980 USA/TOLEDO
> group: VAMPS WITH A SOUL
> position: GOOD
> descript: Im a vampire with a soul. I do good now. Im trying to make up for what i did in the past.
> history: There was alot of bad things I did in my past. I was crazy some would say. I lived for the taste of blood. I lived to toroture my victims. I loved to hear them scream and beg me to let them go, I love the scent of them It was the smell of fear it was breath taking thats if I could breath. When I listen to them scream and cry it was like a drug to me it was my high I was addicted to toromenting my victims I loved it so much I can still hear there screams I can still smell them and I long to do it again.
> items: I have a scar on my left cheek bone. I have soft blue eyes and light blond hair. I wear a long leather jacket.
> powers: I have quick eye sight. I have visions. I can be there one second and the next im gone. I can do anykind of magic there is.
> played_by: Sarah Michelle Geller
> player: i love role playing game Im a very big buffy the vampire slayer and angel fan! thats about it.
> age: over13
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Thanks for the submission! I can tell you are a big fan of the show,
but ultiately it will get this character rejected. Before I post it to
the board for review I'd like to point out how it can be improved (and
thereby improve your chances of acceptance).

the name "Basdwoatx" is a little unorthodox. I don't mind it but can
you provide a reason someone born in 1980 might have such a name or such
a nickname?

You have a soul. Not unheard of, we have a few semi-vampiric characters
in our game, But how did you get it? Why you? Souled vampires are
extraordinarily rare because ALL of their bretheren seek them out and
destroy them unless they are serious badasses like Angel and Spike.

The actress Sarah Michelle Gellar is off limits. Think of our game as a
spinoff series. Within the context of that Sarah could not play a
second part. You will have to find another actress (sorry, I LOVE SMG
too)

C. David Dent

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MrDave's picture

I had to answer this submission becasue I'd hate to think she got rejected without a fair shake. I think my reply was fairly helpful and hopefully a new profile will come through. In the meantime she is "in limbo" just thought I'd share this with you all.

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MrDave's picture

I emailled this too becasue I forgot to add it.
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I forgot to add one more thing to my notes...Call me absent-minded

Under abilities you state:
> powers: I have quick eye sight. I have visions. I can be there one
> second and the next im gone. I can do anykind of magic there is.

LABN isn't about what you can do its about who you are. Don't worry
about the powers. I'd drop the magic-use. The disappearing
act can be a character trait...like Batman who seems to disappear its
just a talent you have for unnoticed exits and entrances. A little
moredetail would help with that.

Visions could be interesting though...visions of what? Like
Cordy's visions on Angel? You see people in trouble? Or are the visions
more vague like you can see the future but can't interpret it? Can you
be more specific please?

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Logan's picture

To be honest, I doubt it was a serious submission, just someone wasting everyones time :(

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Meredith Bell's picture

That's exactly what I was thinking when I read it, that someone had stumbled across our site and just thought they would hammer out a quick submission for a laugh.

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Kaarin's picture

Oddly enough, I have an odd feeling I might know who the person is. :oops:

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Heather's picture

I don't think even rewriting would help this one much. If "happywomen3" seriously wants to play this game I suggest she needs to start from scratch.

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Jadyn's picture

i agree with the deduction that this isn't a serious submission. it sounds like he or she just combined a few of the characters on btvs & angel and came up with basdwoatx. (basdwoatx?!) :?

physical characteristics --> buffy
use-to-be mega-evil vamp-now-with-a-soul --> angel
powerful magic abilities --> willow
gets visions --> cordy
long leather coat --> spike? hehehe...

if u compare this to some of the profiles we've gotten recently, it falls totally flat. if he or she is serious about joining labn, i suggest throwing this character out the window and re-writing everything from scratch.

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Tarix Conny's picture

Don't think i need to add anything but I have a feeling people don't realise the seriousness off this site, They think that the best characters to come up with would be the most powerful and the most pretty/handsome characters. hats way the most desp' that get rejected are those that lack detail and more genuism.

I have to admit, when i got to this website first, I handed my character desp (that one got rejected :oops:) and then read an actaul character descrip' and realised how much i had left out.

Maybe we should put a note saying that they should try and look at other profiles.

Character Submission: Cassidy

Heather's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(daniel@slayage.com) on Friday, March 28, 2003 at 21:43:48
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charname: Cassidy
race: Human
gender: Male
bdate: 7/31/76, USA/New York City
group: Cassidy works alone but is willing to collaborate.
position: His own man
descript: Cassidy is 6 feet, 185 lbs. with black hair and eyes. He is muscular but covers it up and he is a frequent smoker.
history: Cassidy was born in New York City where he encountered his first vampire at the age of 15. Fascinated by this, he began researching demonology and moved to Sunnydale where he could fight demons on the Hellmouth.
While he understands that the Slayer lives there, he decided to work alone after his friend Jesse was killed outside of a diner in New York while fighting off a vamp.
items: He carries a stake and a pair of guns.
powers: Cassidy doesn't have any special powers.
played_by: A cross between Crispin Glover, Colin Farrell and James Marsters.
player: Never played another game. I'm a columnist for slayage.com.
age: over13
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MrDave's picture

I sent an email reply to this applicant and set up an account for him as a "press pass" so he can peek behind the scenes. Once his character is approved or rejected I can translate his account into a regular character account.

The concept is a little weak. It could do with a stronger history perhaps. More detail would be good. Even though Cassidy has no special powers he should have some sort of special equipment...his research into demonology should have told him that humans need an edge...

A magical weapon or a Grimoire or something...

The actor thing has to be worked out...I think all three of those actors are taken...

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Parasol's picture

Actually, I believe this guy is Dan Erenberg. I sent him an e-mail today after reading his column here:

http://www.slayage.com/articles/000050.html#000050

I read his column every chance I get. His column today is about fanfic and I thought I'd invite him to look around LABN. I'm all up for a press pass to look around and hopefully write a bit about us. Slayage.com is a site that is a clearing house for all news items that are Buffy related, but I'm sure you all know that.

If he wants to join in, a more detailed profile would be in order.

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Firefly's picture

I think the character needs to be fleshed out. There's not a lot here. He should look around and get a feel for the game and then resubmit.

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Tarix Conny's picture

I believe there is a high potential there, but needs more detail. A stronger background, childhood, etc. More detail on the death of his girlfriend.

If he moves to LA main reasons behind it. What made him leave hell mouth, etc. I like the character though, but like everyone else has already said, more detail. The idea for him too get a behind the scenes is great Dave :)

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Heather's picture

Uh, it seems that this guy's decided to post as Cassidy despite the 'press pass' status of his account so far... (refer Midseason Two page 5 - user name "slayage").

Was this intended? I know I've not been on the board for a week (even though Dave managed to sneak on once or twice), but from what I see here it seems that he was given access to look around but approval for Cassidy was still pending. In fact, I'd agree with most of the comments here - I'd really like to see a lot more detail before he becomes a pc.

I don't know the content of the e-mail Dave sent this guy (Daniel, I presume, from his e-mail address), and unfortunately Dave is currently en-route back home so we can't ask him about it for a while yet. But from what's written here, I was under the distinct impression that Daniel wasn't cleared for posting to the game board yet.

Does anyone else know anything about this situation at this stage? I'm feeling a little out of touch. :) Maybe because I've been out out touch. :wink:

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Parasol's picture

Dear Heather,

I would venture a guess that you've been in touch; it's just not us you've been touching.

I don't believe that he's been cleared. I should probably leave the e-mailing to him about fleshing out his character to Daddy?

Sherl

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MrDave's picture

Don't look for his post, I deleted it. I had specifically asked him to refrain from posting in the GAME forums until his character had been approved. And I cited that as my primary reason for deleting the post.

to summarize the scene...he had Cassidy appearing in a room with Thule and Alaric and offering his services as a Demon hunter.

I explained that Valor wasn't a demonhunting group and that they are a rather the opposite. I suggested he contact Robin as the Huntmaster of Ulle in LA if he was looking to hunt.

I also tried to explain that its a good idea to clear the use of pivital NPCs like Thule with the creator (in thie case Saadia) before placing them in a scene that might casue a conflict (since Thule has been busy with Tarix of late)

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Tarix Conny's picture

Umm...has anyone heard from Daniel? What's his veiws? Is he going to submit a new character application, or stick with this one?

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Tarix Conny's picture

The thing about the "Basdwoatx" name bugged me for a little while. I mean why did this person name it that. Then with a help of a friend we figured out why it was named this.

B=Buffy
A=Angel
S=Spike
D=Dru/Darla/Dawn
W=Willow
O=Oz
A=Anya
T=Tara
X=Xander

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Mantheana's picture

My input *ignores other board members sighing, screaming and running off*

Well... As many of the other players have mentioned, the chracter does seem to be the result of what would hapen if you put all the Buffy/Angel characters in the microwave and then gave them a stir. (verrrrry clever Saadia, BTW!)

Not that I can comment on characters being rip-offs. Ebony turned out (subconciously I might add) to be an updated, if amusing, version of Drusilla. HOWEVER, She did have some background, and wasn't insanely powerful (just insane).

Bstfglewtfglywotsit, needs some texture and flavour. Something to tell us that the player is able to get ideas from their mind and well as the TV show.

There. i think thats all i have to say. urm. yub.

Booj

p.s. Adam, who is it??? You can't just say you might know and leave it like that!!!!

Character Proposal: Aura

MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(why_be_sane@hotmail.com) on Friday, April 18, 2003 at 05:06:25
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charname: Aura Starr
race: Human
gender: Female
bdate: April 6, 1984
group: Dark Nekos
position: Leader
descript: Aura is a fiesty young woman with supernatural powers. She's a witch, psychic, and leader of the Dark Nekos.
history: Aura was born to two totally and completely normal parents in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. Her mom had a dark secret though, her sister, June Harksen, was a slayer for about a year and 10 months. Aura's best friend, Tommy Valentine was learning magick by the time he was 10 and started teaching her. Aura learned she was psychic on her 11th birthday when she accidentally almost set the house on fire. Her little sister, Destiny, demanded to learn how to use magick so she taught her a few spells. When she was 17 she went to go see the Rocky Horror Picture Show with Tommy, who was now her boyfriend. On their way home they were attacked by a group of vampires and Tommy was sired. Aura got out of high school not too long after that and moved to LA to a)go to college and b) become a star. Tommy followed her out there and is stalking her. She got a job and has gotten a few gigs here and there acting and singing.
items: Laptop, backpack, books.
powers: Magick, pyrokiniesies, telekiniesis, telepathy, shapeshifting.
played_by: Renee Zellweger
player: Name: Danica
Age: 14
Job: Student
Other Games: Slayer: A Twist of Fate
age: over13
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MrDave's picture

This character is virtually identical to the one she was playing on SAToF and they killed her off.

I suggest you read some of her posts on their site before you agree (or disagree) with letting her play with us.

Character Proposal: Calinda

MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(calinda2004@yahoo.com) on Friday, April 18, 2003 at 23:24:01
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charname: Calinda
race: Vampire
gender: Female
bdate: 02/14/1953 USA/Wisconsin Rapids
group: n/a
position: n/a
descript: Blonde Hair,Blue Eyes,5'7"
history: I live life to the fullest lived in:
Paris
London
LA
New York
Palm Beach
Berlin
Moscow
Travelled around the World
Became a Vampire on Valentines Day 1953 to my beloved and deceased Reign who died of a stake on 14 of may 1953. I will miss him dearly. I've only killed 3 people in the time i've spent on this earth and hope to keep it that way both when i was first learning about being what i am. I have 3 mansions one on the east coast and one on the west coast and one in aspen. I have 3 bank accounts all over the world. My family is wiccan and I come from a magical conception. As for the rest well it all depends on where i'm at and what i'm doing.
items: clothes that i'm wearing an athame, my magical powers, and some cash
powers: Telepathic
Psychic
Magical Powers
Knowledgable
Dextrous
Strength
Beauty
played_by: myself
player: I'm 5'5",17 and very energetic i work for my mother and have 2 baby sitting jobs on the side. I've never played an online role-playing game before i look almost like my character except i have auburn hair and am only wiccan by choice.
age: over13

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MrDave's picture

My initial thought...another Magical Vampire. YAWN

My next thought. NEXT

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Tarix Conny's picture

Um...i'm sure she tried...i think..um...i think i'll say no to this. Firstly its a bit too concise and its a sort of story already heard. Maybe we can invite her to try again?

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Tyler_Hyatt's picture

To be simple, no. The way of things, any additional vampires will have serious trouble staying invovled.

Character Proposal: Amy Deck

MrDave's picture

Below is the result of your feedback form. It was submitted by
(andrew_kim316@yahoo.com) on Thursday, April 17, 2003 at 21:11:13
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charname: Amy Deck
race: Human
gender: Female
bdate: May 5th, 1973 Los Angeles, U.S.A
descript: Athletic, timid, and intelligent woman, who works as a spy for the CIA.
history: She was recruited by a CIA agent Sydney Bristow last year for saving Sydney's life. Sydney saw a potential in Amy as she was trained to be a CIA agent.

Few months later, in the summer, she was assigned to her first mission with Sydney. In her mission, Sydney was killed. She went back to the CIA Headquarters, but found everyone dead.

Her mission is to save herself, and research on her mission to find out who was behind it.
items: Laptop, Government files
powers: None
played_by: Amy Jo Johnson
player: I am 16... From San Jose, California.
age: over13
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MrDave's picture

This stinks of the work of groups like "The Balance" and MJ12. Not sure what the link to the supernatural would be...

Right now with Galen and Tyler I think we haveour fill of government agencies. Unless one of you guys wants to recruit Amy into your agencies...

up to you guys. Initial reaction: Revise and re-submit.

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Kaarin's picture

Sort of agree with Dave, though would note that MJ12 at least would have no problem at all using regular army units. Though most army spec ops teams working for them might not ever have a clue who they're really working for.

Though finding everyone dead in CIA HQ in Langley might make the news. That could be a bit too big of a killing spree, given the current public knowledge of the occult.

So yes, revise, resubmit, expand. There could be some interesting story potential here if she's MJ12 or Balance, since Tyler effectively left and Galen managed to weasal his way out of MJ12 by holding critical information over the director's head. Especially if she's actually loyal to said group.

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Tarix Conny's picture

Isn't that Andrew? aka Derek Park?

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Tarix Conny's picture

Um...i like the profile...and i even went and read some of her intial posts, but they were mostly full of speech and not a lot of description.

I am going to remain neutral for the time being and find more of her posts to read a little further donw the time line.

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MrDave's picture

Wow...it is. Totally missed that connection. Good Job Saadia

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Jadyn's picture

i've read a couple of her posts... saadia's right, there's not much to go by. using the yardstick the other new members have set, i'd have to give this one a "no". not enough detail, especially about her "magic"... i was like - "oh no, not another powerful magic user..."

heh... coincidentally, the character and i have the same birthday. :) of course, i was born much earlier than 1984. :P

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Meredith Bell's picture

Victor wrote:
This stinks of the work of groups like "The Balance" and MJ12.

I also think that it's too much like Alias - the show where the character Sydney Bristow originates. If Drew is basing his character on this TV series then I'd urge him to get his facts straight since, as a double agent working between the CIA and SD6 Sydney Bristow wouldn't exactly be in a position to recruit new agents to the CIA (Hell the last ep. I watched the CIA were hunting Bristow down!)

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Meredith Bell's picture

I'm always wary of people who list 'magical powers' in the 'powers' column. Plus WHY do people feel the need to have both vampire powers AND magical powers too! It just reaks of greediness! LOL :D

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Tyler_Hyatt's picture

Having not seen any posts, I can say that powers list is too long. Each one alone is enough to base an effective character on. Pyrokenisis?

On that alone, revise and resubmit.

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Tyler_Hyatt's picture

Agreeing with the whole round. THe CIA connection isn't needed, unless it's a place fo recruitment. I can think of a few ways she could wind up in town by midseasons end if she's Balance

Plus, having a loyalist around would be fun for me.

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Tarix Conny's picture

Thanks Dave :D.

The thing was, i talked to Andrew a while back, and he told me he had slight problems with coming up with a character and that he works best with un-supernatural stuff. So i told him to try and submit a character application trying to base it on realistic terms and then she/he could be linked into this game later on.

I think he was having some problems with ideas.

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